My soul is a captive, unceasing in love, enchanting. My soul is a captive, Sensual love, infinite. My soul is a captive, With two flickering eyes. My soul is a captive. In the morning sun. My soul is a captive, Captive between two hands. My soul is a captive, To your loving heart. My soul is a captive, but nothing, I'm so good. Because when you are loved, You cannot feel captive. ~ Hope for tomorrow
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And are you loved?
It's wonderful, really such works can be written under the pseudonym "Hope for tomorrow".
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WIZARD My soul is a humble captive, your soul captivates it! - captive, my soul is in two silent eyes, My soul begs you and swears: she begs; - I'm watching you; - a century has passed ... Your sorceress soul is silent. My soul is tormented in hunger and thirst, but your soul does not call, your soul, child and deity ... Silence reigns in your eyes: your soul may be ashamed of its magical celebration. Peyo Yavorov
Arranging three pairs of rhymes is not a work - anyone can do it. If the author is 14, 15 years old - fine, but if she is older, it is not something special. I always give the same advice to all novice poets - read, read a lot! Writing is done by reading. Don't be fooled by the enthusiastic boasting of the commenting young ladies on the site, without offending them - they don't understand literature, firstly, because of their age and secondly, they have no basis for comparison. Look at the poems of Petya Dubarova, for example, she was a student when she wrote them. Success!