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By kimoshi_01 September 24, 2020 7 answers Last updated September 24, 2020

For me, your long-lasting memory of you will always remain icy. I will carry you in my heart as a lesson so that I do not fall into amok again. Everyone will know what caused my whole life to fail. There is already someone to save me from your pathetic, vile games. Believe me, it will be very bitter if you see who replaced you! You will learn only when you have to. This will be my SURPRISE !!!

Answers 7

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okumafrance answered · September 24, 2020

   I wonder what this surprise will be? One girl

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johan_johanrr answered · September 24, 2020

   lol, very cool, keep writing :)

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thefitthomas answered · September 24, 2020

   Rhythmically, cheerfully. And number 1 asks the question as if it were something that will really happen. This is an amateur attempt at poetry. As you begin to recognize yourself and I am very surprised.

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ausm29 answered · September 24, 2020

   Author, special greeting - "Soon" - Preslava. It is very thematic for me. :) :)

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nawa3emcom answered · September 24, 2020

   There is a lot of accumulated pain here. You don't have to be an artist to establish it. But this is life - when you give surprises to people, expect the same ...

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sportingclubedeportugal answered · September 24, 2020

   The message seems to contradict itself. If you no longer want it in your life and have replaced it with another, why do you still think and write about it? You keep it as a lesson, but it's always been funny to me when someone says in a poem or a song that they don't care about the old love anymore.

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tv4vadret answered · September 25, 2020

   Number 6 is right, I have written about  and its condition originating from the condition of its people, but not for women. I will not write, I will not have to.