Dust, fog and then wind. Will the rain come Dust, fog, and then loneliness. A lone traveler in this desert, human laughter is your dream. You will wait for a quiet hope there - then the rain. And the hornbeam on the other side - the same scary ghost, brings you a message: "Here the road will not end, you will still be waiting for your forgotten dream" Dust, fog ...... like a lonely flower. How long will you wait? Rain, dream - how long both? Miss Rodriguez ** (** is not a well-known poet, I decided to invent my own pseudonym)
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It's nice!
I don't know how to tell you so I'll just tell you .... You have no talent.
to the second commented - how come out of 25 people only you don't like it :)? everyone has a taste and I am not a professional writer I write for pleasure
It is beautiful - it is not sucked out of the fingers, but is poured out of aspiration, longing soul. I keep wondering why such things do not meet with a response? I'm not talking about approval or rejection, but simply from reading, from putting at least for a moment in the place of the author? We seem to have gone wild and stupid, we have become animals grazing Phoenician signs in the offices. Well done author and do not despair, even if no one likes what you have written, it is not in vain - the universe always feels beautiful and will answer you with the same. She has the uniqueness to understand and encourage you. And the grazing dollars will be sent to them by someone else grazing dollars, who will scold them to the brim and they will be left with only their poor and tattered soul like an old rag ball.
No. 3-where did you see 25 comments? !!
Do you expect to find any objective opinion here, given that this site includes all kinds of individuals? Of course you have talent! I have noticed how the most untalented "poems" published here have a bunch of positive comments, and the valuable ones "You have no talent". Read your works in front of a selected audience, no one here will understand you! .. Unfortunately..